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MY BIG FAT DRAGON CH4

Warning: If you don’t like fat Dragons and vore, then do not read.

Chapter 4: Wish Fulfillment
I got up and looked at the small little dragon as it shook the remains of the shattered eggshell of itself. I backed up and stepped on an old dry leaf. The dragon instantly whipped around and faced me. Our eyes locked. I wanted to turn and run, but something in the way those eyes stared at me held me firmly in place. Without warning, the dragon leaped onto me with such force that I fell over backwards. To my amazement, it did not hurt me, but began licking my face all over. Once I was thoroughly covered in drool, it got off and let me up. Not knowing what to do, I just stood there looking at the dragon confused. It saw this, and its little head dropped, a look of sheer sadness upon its face.
“You don’t remember me, do you?”
I was confused. I liked dragons a lot, but never did I imagine seeing one up close, and this one was a little too real for comfort. I felt a weird feeling as I looked into the sad orange eyes, as if I was indeed forgetting something, or rather someone. I thought long and hard about what was going on. How did this dragon know me? It had just hatched from its egg, yet it was talking to me as if I was a long lost friend. Scared that the dragon’s sadness might turn to anger, I tried to get up and make a run for it. Like lightning, the dragon leapt onto me and pinned me securely to the ground. I struggled to get free, but the dragon was surprisingly strong for its small size.
“Please… its me.”
I stopped squirming when a silver tear hit my cheek. The dragon was crying. My head ached as I racked it for information. Its orange scales, blue wings and claws, the row of blue spikes along it’s back, even it’s tail, somehow gave me this feeling of happiness and safety, as if she were a protector. It finally hit me as the memory came rushing back to me, and I couldn’t be more happy or confused.
“Ember, is that really you?”
The dragon’s eyes lit up again and she smiled at me. She started licking my face again.
“I can’t believe you remembered!” the dragon (or Ember, as we must now call her) shouted happily.
I would have wiped the dragon saliva off my face, but I was too happy to see Ember, and my arms and legs were still bound to the deck. I remembered the first time I ever saw her. As a little kid, I was even sad and alone then, so I imagined Ember so I would have someone to talk to. She was my first friend, and even now all I had were pity friends who felt sorry for me.
“But, how?” Ember laughed as if it were the simplest question in the world.
“You wished for me silly, or did you forget that too?” Ember said as she released me and allowed me to sit up. “I missed seeing you as well, and I thought you’d be happy to see me, so here I am!” Ember’s tail wagged back and forth sweeping several vines off the deck, still smiling happily.
Before I could bet up and give my long lost friend a well-deserved pat, she again jumped on me and grabbed me, only to pull me close in a tight warm hug. I wrapped my arms around her and laughed happily as I hugged back my dear friend, who I only dreamed I’d ever see, never the less hug.
“Honestly though, I came here for a reason.” She nodded and let go, sitting down in my lap. “And I think you know why.” She smiled again.
“What’s that? I’m still surprised that you even exist.” I said returning the smile. It was true that I had been wishing to see her in flesh and blood all my life, but I never expected for it to actually be granted.
“Oh come on, you should know, well anyway here’s a hint.” She said showing me her sharp white teeth.
I gulped a little as I had vague idea of what she meant. “You’re not going to eat me are you?”
“What? No! I’m still much to little for that! And anyway even if I did I wouldn’t really hurt you. I know how you like it though. Maybe when I get bigger.”
I sighed greatly in relief. Of course when I was young, I imagined her much bigger than me, and I would often daydream that she would eat me to keep me safe or something. For some reason I liked it when I was eaten, or if she ate someone else I didn’t like. Those people never came back out, but while I was in her I was never hurt. She continued talking.
“My two real reasons for coming are, 1: I heard you wishing for me so often recently and suffering so badly without me that I decided we were separated long enough. And 2…” She trailed off as she seemed to think better of saying what she was about to say. “Well let’s just say that’s for you,” here she nodded towards Josie and Arkaliel, “and your friends to find out later, when I’ve reached a larger size.”
“But then I f you’re not going to eat me,” I said, still greatly confused, “then what did you mean when you bared your fangs?”
Ember looked down at her stomach as it suddenly rumbled. “Well…I was kind of thinking…of…well…living up to your expectations, if you know what I mean.” She smiled sheepishly and winked.
I slapped my forehead at how stupid I was acting. Ember was big in more ways than one in my imagination. After all, I had wished for that too.
“Of course! Of course you can Ember! You should know me better by now. There’s no reason to be shy about it!”
“I know you like it, but I doubt they will.” She nodded towards the animals again.
I understood her completely about being modest now. She was shy because she didn’t want to be considered a freak for wanting to be fat, and the fact that the news crews were broadcasting this across the planet only made it worse. I couldn’t blame her. Everyone that I had trusted well enough to tell that I liked fat dragons had thought that I was a freak too. I could tell all of this was making her very nervous and I turned and addressed Josie and Arkaliel.
“Ember and I need some private time to catch up. Make a perimeter a good distance around the house though.”
They and the other animals did as they were told. Once they were safely out of earshot, Ember resumed talking.
“Thanks for that, but won’t they disapprove if the next time they see me I’m fat?” she asked worriedly.
“Well the next time they see you you’ll probably be big as well as fat.” I reassured her, gently rubbing her behind the ears. “I doubt anyone would be so stupid as to tease you about it now, even when you’re small. You are a dragon after all, and not only are you special and unique in this modern age, but that also puts you on the endangered species list. No one will dare hurt you for fear of being punished, and even if they do hurt you, whether physically or emotionally, you have my express permission to hurt back. The same goes for me, as your legal guardian. I promise that as long as I’m here, I won’t let a single thing touch you.
Ember jumped up on my shoulder and nuzzled my cheek in appreciation. “So, shall we?” she said, smiling one more as I entered the house with her perched on my shoulder.
I am quite pleased with the way this chapter turned out. I decided to do it in first person, since, after all that is me and this is my life as I would like it. It also helped me think better if it was me talking. Keep leaving comments so I can know how I'm doing.
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Kennefish Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
He's dead Jim sadly :(
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games4355 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013
its been 6 years since this chapter was uploaded, and there's no chapter 5 :(
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sorarocks531 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Aww so cute.

I love this story so much.

hope you update soon.

I Wish Ember would hug me.

:(
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Werdna213 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
whens the next chapter coming
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onlyanaccount Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011
Well if your gonna feed her don't forget the delicious wonders of BELGIAN WAFFLES! (And give her belly rubs and hugs too.
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shadowsirius Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
ah ember dont eat me!!
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DarthT15 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Any more?
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PokemonInflator Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010
i love this story and hey is it ok if i can help with the rest of it and i'll do it free of charge
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nights192 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2010
OK, I finally figured out what was missing...REALISM. As it turns out, my style calls for a more realistic approach. But still, yet another leap forward.
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hummingbirdfeeder Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
Very good so far but I have to say that there is a surprisingly similar story called never alone that I read recently that is very close to the beginning. I don't really care which one came first but I like the differences in this story.
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009
Yeah. I read it too and while I do admit that it did come first, and I did use it as kind of a spring board for this chapter... (does that when he has writers block) I assure you that when I get back to writing on the book... whenever that is since I'm a senior now and a lot more busy... it will be far different and will be perhaps the longest series ever posted on DA. I'm thinking like around 125 chapters at least 3x longer than the first one combined.
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Kennefish Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Awesome can't wait when are you going to post them
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fatpaw Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009
very interesting story so far, though I doubt the animals would have issues with Ember being fat. For most animals appearance isn't as important as scent, voice and over all personality; plus I could imagine that some animals may like fat too
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009
Thanks. ^^;
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fatpaw Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009
welcome
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Awesome-In-A-Can Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009
At first it seemed like a story that i might have thought a little dumb, but once i read the first chapter I read the rest in a day. It's a very interesting storyline. Whens the 5th one coming out?
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2009
Not for a while. I'm a lot busier now than I was back then since I'm in 11th grade.
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Awesome-In-A-Can Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2009
oh, ok then. Im makin a story about a fat dragon myself. However, it seems like the storyline of mine will be more serious than yours. You, along with any1 else, can help me make mine.
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2009
Okay. If you ever get a writers block, just let me know.
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Awesome-In-A-Can Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009
ok, thanks
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009
Dear readers,

I am sorry to say that now that I am in 11th grade, I just don't have enough time to work on the book anymore. However, someday I will get back to work on it, this I swear. In the mean time, if you'd like to talk to me or just want to see what I'm doing nowadays, chat with me on MSN (Flare-the-fat-dragon@hotmail.com) or watch me on furaffinity.net (BigObeseDragon) Please do not respond directly, as it took 30 min to type this on my PSP, as I am blocked from DA on my computer.
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Kennefish Featured By Owner Edited Aug 2, 2014
Hello I'm Kenneth and I would like to help I have been trying to reach you to tell you I love the story and would love if it were to continue
and would be willing to help with anything you might need please say something back
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LarienDen Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2008
That's really great, your attention to detail is brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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No-Straight-Lines Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
This... Is... AWESOME!!! I can NOT wait until the next chapter! Seriously!
Heh heh... When I have writers block, I stare at pictures of my characters and think of what they would do in certain situations. It almost always works...
This story has inspired me to put up some fiction! But don't worry because I won't copy you! Yay, for inspiration!
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2008
Thanks, truth is, I've already gotten 8 pages for the next chapter, haven't coppied them from
my own computer to this yet. Not enough time.
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Kennefish Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Awesome can't wait
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waterpicker Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2008
There are laws that say if u believe in something with ur heart it can come true no matter how fictional but is has to be a hearts desire on the highest lvl's
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fat-lover Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2007
hey^^
its great and i found the idea of a sweet and fat dragon really sexy and cool^.^
Hope it continue very soon
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2007
Thank you very much. It might take a while though. I've hit a bit of a writers block. ^^;
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fat-lover Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007
oh tats not so good ><
Hope you get over it very soon^^
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eIat10s Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2007
Continue plz?
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biffiea Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! I love it! An imaginary friend coming to life is one of my favorite themes!
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ZeroWhitefang Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007
cant "weight" for chapter 5
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007
lol verry funny. Having writers block so It might take a while.
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whitelightning15 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
very good, I can't wait for the next chapter
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Deus-Ex-Letum Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2007
Usually by this point, most people that write such stories have just gone plain overboard, making the story so blasted ridiculous that it ceases to be enjoyable. However, you have such a wonderful sense of moderation, one that keeps people thirsting for more while also not failing to give enough at the same time. As I have said on the others, the style is nice, the characters seem real, which is a very good attribute, and everything connects well together. Very good job! Keep it up if you would. ^_^
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
Awww. Stop. It's not that good. sorry to keep you waiting but I've also got writers block. It's not easy writing this cause i'm a perfectionist.
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Deus-Ex-Letum Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
Oh, but it is good, and I can kinda tell you are a perfectionist by some of the meticulous details you add and other signs that are strewn about your work. Like I said, it is good, you just haven't hit the part that will bring in the most people, and both you and me know what part that is.
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
lol The part where Ember gets fat? hehe
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fatdragon500 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2007
this is the gerastest story i have ever read it makes me wish i had a dragon friend too
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mybigfatdragon Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007
Tyvw my friend.
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